The amative man with created red hair and a pocketless plaid jacket was about to hold the arm of a fubsy blind woman who was curiously smiling on a busy train platform.
As his pocked, hardened hand extended in a cordial show of support, the menial mystery of his lost reading glasses appeared snugly in the caring clutch of a perceptive, unbusy lady named Rose.
(Photo: Edward Roads)
Written by Edward Roads
Lovely story ! Still amazed by your writing. π β€οΈ
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Thank You so much for your wonderfully kind words of support Nelly. I really appreciate it.
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Nice story. A pack punched two line sentence making a story. Well done
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Thank You so very much. I honestly appreciate it.
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You’re welcome π
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So good Edward! Cheers, Majella
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You are so kind. Thank You.
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Reblogged this on ravenhawks' magazine and commented:
Nice story, beautiful rose.
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Thank You for your thoughtful words. I appreciate it.
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How does the saying go, “A rose by any other name is still a rose”? That is what came to my mind reading this post and seeing the photo.
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Thank You very much. I appreciate that.
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Another intriguing entry sending me to the dictionary. How great to add to my vocabulary! Thanks for the post.
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Thank You so much Dr. Mary. I truly appreciate it.
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My pleasure and thank you for sharing your talents with us.
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Two sentences yet intriguing and humorous. Plus I learned two new words.
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I honestly appreciate that Kevin. Thank You.
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You are certainly welcome. My words, my vocabulary are still pedestrian. When I read someone like you, it inspires me to be a better writer, not just someone who can use words, someone who can craft them. Humor and sarcasm come easily, deft emotional movement through word comes with much more skill. You have hard-won skill.
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Those innocuous women, some named Rose, can be so sneaky! π
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I greatly appreciate that. Thank You so much.
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Was this a challenge of some sort to make a story in 2 sentences?
Just wondering.
A very effective 2 sentences worth anyway! Now I want to know more!
Ann
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