What Allie Carraig then experienced was something most wish they could one day know, or at least approach… an awakening of sense and spirit, life and feeling… at that moment (she figured it was just another headache) her eyes finally unrolled into a less painful semblance of focus.
The boots were getting soaked as the tide continued to be playful, splashing in and out, laces floated; and her well worn footwear filled with salty beach and leftover moonshine… then the gigantic bird stepped forward and screamed.
Written by Edward Roads
Mytwosentences 
Love this!! I’m intrigued…a lot more meaning between the lines. Brilliant MTS!
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Thank You so very much for your kind words Nelly. Along with other wonderful readers, your interest is true inspiration as I continue to tell this story.
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Wonderfully written Edward. I felt as though I was there in that moment. A gigantic bird screamed at me. Yikes!
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Thank You Whip! I greatly appreciate your wonderfully kind words.
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You were not kidding, Edward! This last post along with “220” had me floored! Love the first line of this post about “an awakening of sense and spirit”, WOW! I agree, she is having an out of this world experience with all her thoughts and events. Then you threw me for another loop where the bird squawked at Allie in the end. What is going on in that amazing two sentence mind of yours?! Love how you always leave us wanting more! Brilliant…
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I deeply appreciate your interest and wonderfully kind words Anjali. From the bottom of my heart, Thank You so much.
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Those boots will take forever to dry. At least her clothes dried. Magically. Fascinating read, Edward.
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Thank You so much for your interest and terrifically kind comments Dr. Mary. This story is slowly but surely falling out of my head… I have it all worked out, just need to get there.
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Progress is your two sentences per post. Carefully crafted too. Slow and steady wins the race if you are racing…I still envision that book in the future. You will get there when the time is right, Edward. Best of luck!
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