There were moments, brief indeed, perhaps better described as pauses, where unremarkable events that took place during the course of a given day seemed to subliminally disengage; as if the air, in all it’s capacities and nuances, suddenly got quiet.
Those were the thoughts that seeped into Allie Carraig’s unsteady mind when her regard for the bloody syringe abruptly dissevered… and she noticed something absolutely terrifying.
(Written by Edward Roads)
Mytwosentences 
I really like the second sentence. I had to read the first once twice, but I still wasn’t sure what it was saying. I like your use of unusual words.
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Thank You for your kind words. I appreciate it.
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(The first sentence eludes to earlier events in the story. It’s also a transition from Brigadoon back to Allie)
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So intriguing! I want more!! Keep on writing Edward. You have a gift.
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I deeply appreciate your continued interest and support Nelly. Thank You so very much.
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For one with major needle phobia like myself, I can’t believe I can still enjoy those sentences! But I do! Well written
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Thank You so much Kat. I truly appreciate your continued interest.
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Love that first part.
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I really appreciate that. Thank You Wendy.
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Intriguing! And a lovely use of the English language!
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You are wonderfully kind Laurie. Thank You.
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Like your sentences!
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I honestly appreciate that Kendall. Thank You so very much.
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You are welcome!
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