Sticky and gooey smooth oozed down both sides of her shivering cheeks… she ate another gooseberry, then another… Allie’s strength was coming back.
She turned and ran down the beach to gather her clothes… then quickly back up to the top of the berm where she tossed her sandy, wet clothes into the warm, wavy grass to dry… that’s when she saw a huge spotted gray sea bird rapidly descending toward her.
Written by Edward Roads
Ooh another plot twist with the bird! Gooseberries in two posts, love it! It is great how your writing creates a wonderful image that is so clear in the reader’s mind.
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Your kindness is my fuel. Get ready, you will blown away!!!!!
Thank You Anjali, your support is priceless.
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What did the bird want? A gooseberry? The girl? I go for the gooseberry but must read on.
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