The rain began from an almost cloudless sky and Allie stood straight up and looked Zenobia directly in the eye.
(Baby Stella began to cry) Allie, shivering and without tense, reached out and hugged this person whom she never met… a cover was draped upon Allie, but her shivering didn’t stop… nor did Stella’s cry.
Written by Edward Roads
Mytwosentences 
Wow, this is riveting!!
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Glad you are still writing. Thank you.
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I love how much color you squeeze out of two sentences! Do you have books out?
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Great post! Love the sentences and the strong photograph!
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Zenobia—Hawthorne!
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