“Mam, you need to have your papers ready, and please, if you don’t mind, remove your hand from my table.”
Allie, who was noticeably ripe and well past exhausted, slammed her other hand down and clamored, “Help me, for christ sake, please”… then her bloodshot blues rolled up to all white, and she collapsed.
(Photo: Edward Roads)
Written by Edward Roads
Mytwosentences 
That is quite the story! Wow!
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I really appreciate your interest in this evolving story. Thank You, Thank You & Thank You!
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The calming and rippling water is in contrast to the written story. In addition, the lapping waves in harmony have such a peaceful effect compared to the lone and damaged (possible) dock in the middle. Love the visual artistry and the intriguing story.
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I truly appreciate your thoughtful insight. Thank You so very much.
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You continue to wow and amaze me with your skill for painting a story picture in two sentences!
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Dawn, your terrifically kind words are appreciated. Thank You.
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Your story so intense while your photo so calming. Nice work Edward!!
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Thank You so much Nelly. I truly appreciate it.
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