Mytwosentences 181 (Dying To Know 5)

“Mam, you need to have your papers ready, and please, if you don’t mind, remove your hand from my table.”

Allie, who was noticeably ripe and well past exhausted, slammed her other hand down and clamored, “Help me, for christ sake, please”… then her bloodshot blues rolled up to all white, and she collapsed.

(Photo: Edward Roads)

Written by Edward Roads

8 thoughts on “Mytwosentences 181 (Dying To Know 5)

  1. The calming and rippling water is in contrast to the written story. In addition, the lapping waves in harmony have such a peaceful effect compared to the lone and damaged (possible) dock in the middle. Love the visual artistry and the intriguing story.

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