This time the quiet air seemed to focus her scattered thoughts, instead of transporting them to muddled longitudes and convoluted cerebral precincts that constantly flickered from just beyond arm’s length.
Allie backed up two or three steps, knelt down, and picked up a fairly hefty, discharged syringe with dried blood on the outside… but the disturbing crimson color was also on the inside.
(Written by Edward Roads)
Mytwosentences 
Your story in intriguing. I want more!
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Thank You for your continued interest in DTK Nelly. I honestly do appreciate it.
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That’s it, I’m hooked. I only discovered your 2 sentences bog yesterday and I’m really impressed by how poignant each post is, and how beautifully written they are. In this post, your description of her usually scattered thoughts is brilliant. It truly describes what having scattered thoughts feels like! (Not that MY thoughts are ever scattered of course 😉).
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You are so wonderfully kind. Thank You very much for following my little story… I am truly grateful.
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My pleasure. Looking forward to more!
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Great post!
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I really appreciate that. Thank You very much.
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You are welcome!
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Could fit in a mystery.
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Thank You so much. I hope my little story is interesting.
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Excellent.
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Looking forward for more story🙋
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I think your blog is so good,The idea of two sentences is brilliant
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Thank You so much Katherine. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment.
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