“Sweetheart, I am just trying to show you why we prosper…it’s ok…you’ll remember this and thank me one day beautiful…stop resisting…you stupid… you useless, lazy bitch…like your… wasted…mother…c’mon, your father is talking to you.. “.
Allie opened her knowing, bloodshot eyes, stood straight up in the dank, and walked toward the water.
(Written by Edward Roads)
These are a pair of well-written sentences… but they ‘re hard to read.
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That is the very point. Thank You so much Dorothea, your kind words are greatly appreciated.
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I like both of these. I can see where they are going. Sent from Mail for Windows 10
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If you can see, tell me. Thank You for your interest.
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